the sound the metal makes
thump thump thump
the sound my heart makes
i'm a self destructive machine
i'm made of stainless steel and i still rust in the sun
i've been forged to make others happy, but i can't even do that for myself
i'm a failed experiment
an inventors plan A
a robot tossed in a box and thrown carelessly in the attic
with a dying battery and a bent antennae
that's having a hard time picking up society's signals
turns out my blueprints didn't pass the visual test
i was the paradigm to be rendered useful
but they made a better version of me
and put it on the cover of vogue magazine
looks like the newest model was a success
they'll be making duplicates of her
as long as they fix any systematic errors
tick tock tick tock
the clock in me that tells me the time i have left
i can hear it ticking now
reminding me i didn't come with a lifetime warranty
and if i break i'm broken for good
so you better stamp the words fragile on the box
before you shove me in the attic
and turn off the lights
Hey.
ReplyDeleteIt's Monday morning. There are 4 people in class today. Okay, 10.
This is good stuff. I think. It's tough to read in public.
"i'm a failed experiment
an inventors plan A"
This was cool.
My whole life feels like a failed experiment sometimes. But that can be a good thing.
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"that's having a hard time picking up society's signals" wowow this is such a good post! I love it because it is real.
ReplyDelete"tick tock tick tock
the clock in me that tells me the time i have left
i can hear it ticking now"
this is also my favorite part
I agree with both of them ^
ReplyDelete"reminding me i didn't come with a lifetime warranty
ReplyDeleteand if i break i'm broken for good
so you better stamp the words fragile on the box
before you shove me in the attic
and turn off the lights"
You're an amazing writer
"i'm a failed experiment
ReplyDeletean inventors plan A"
this is so good wow
I love this whole thing so so much. It's so good!
ReplyDelete"i'm a self destructive machine"
ReplyDeleteI wanted to quote all of this.
And that last paragraph.. so good.. so so good..